A very creative piece! very true and heartfelt. i loved it alot. i loved the detail you put into it also..

A wheel that turns,
and works overtime,
and a heart that pounds,
in beat with mine.

that stanza was great. i especially loved the last 2 lines, very wise word choice.

Why live a life,
with the lights dimmed down,
when you can sleep in the dark,
where silence is the only sound.

and that stanza really did it for me. a great ending. the last line gave me the goosebumps! a simply wonderful write. job well done. keep up the great work. 5/5.

-Ashlei.