This is a very passionate love poem with gret metaphors and avery original rhyme scheme

I would love to be given one like this

well done

A very lovely poem with beautiful emotions ^^
The rhyming flow is great and maintained throughout the poem =]
Excellent job

I like how you describe ur life as a gift from God. It was certainly a delightful read.
Now i know why you feel so lucky

Excellent Job
5/5

I like how you describe the love of your life*