The End

by Mishka   Oct 6, 2008


Just let me one more time clear my mind
And seek the ideas that I can never find
Just let me hold my body close to my body's departure
Just let me find something to grasp
Or else
The End
Will overbear my little fingers
And cross out my eyes
And seal my mouth
With stiches
And push me off these feet.

10.05.08

I just portrayed this poem from once that I had felt this. :)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Hantman

    This is a good piece but could probably be made a lot better.

    for one, this line:
    "
    Just let me hold my body close to my bodies departure" is very confusing, hold your body close to your bodies departure? i dont really get it and its tough to understand.

    also, if the end gets larger, too me larger isnt a bad word. maybe if you used one with a more negative feel it would bring out more emotion, like

    "the end will be hopeless, or catacylsmic, or something of the sense..

    it would also be better if you expanded and made it longer, but thats just be wantign to read more :-)

    anyways good job,
    keep it up
    -chris