You Did Change

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Oct 6, 2008


I never thought this would happen again
I thought it was all over between us
But now I can see you really did change
And now I'm happier than ever

Touching those lips of yours with mine
Feeling your arms wrapped around me
I never thought you would be here again
But it feels so good to have you here again

You're someone really special to me
More special than anyone else in my life
I'm never going to let you go
Because you're the only man I want

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Oh and I saw nothing wrong with that needed fixed or anything. Nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really liked this poem. I can really relate to it. The word choice was great and so was the flow. Keep up the good work. I gave it a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Repetition is a problem again .. But that's so easily changed . Um , I don't really see an artistic point to this poem .. There's no imagery , no rhymes , no flow .. So perhaps adding one of those three aspects would make it a bit better . 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Good poem I like the meaning and point to it. I have actually felt the way before and I know it's one of the most amazing feelings one can have.. Great job

    Beck

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