Worthy Gold

by Mr. Darcy   Oct 6, 2008


Moon beams dancing
behind my eyes.
The swirl of dawn
whispers sunrise.

Silent magic
raises her face,
crimson flowing,
sky draped with lace.

Smiling over
young and old,
freedom is a
worthy gold.

A short text message
that I sent this morning to a friend
and now to you dear reader.
Have a great day!

M. Moran
6.10.08
09.35

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Dear Michael,

    sometimes the most beautiful lines come to us when we least expect it.
    I think what you made is so very beautiful and it came straight from the heart!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Michael
    A beautiful poem. Feeling the morning coming after a long night. The imagery and word choices are awesome.

    Moon beams dancing
    behind my eyes.
    The swirl of dawn
    whispers sunrise.

    After a long night the coming of morning such a welcoming sight :)

    Silent magic
    raises her face,
    crimson flowing,
    sky draped with lace.

    The vision you have painted with your words is magical. It made me feel as if I was right there watching this beautiful sunrise.

    Smiling over
    young and old,
    freedom is a
    worthy gold.

    I can feel the warmth of the sun smiling on me Micheal. The freedom of being a part of this awesome morning is fantastic :)
    ~Bravo~
    ((hugs))
    Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Coco Bean

    Beautiful