Comments : Worthy Gold

  • 16 years ago

    by Coco Bean

    Beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Michael
    A beautiful poem. Feeling the morning coming after a long night. The imagery and word choices are awesome.

    Moon beams dancing
    behind my eyes.
    The swirl of dawn
    whispers sunrise.

    After a long night the coming of morning such a welcoming sight :)

    Silent magic
    raises her face,
    crimson flowing,
    sky draped with lace.

    The vision you have painted with your words is magical. It made me feel as if I was right there watching this beautiful sunrise.

    Smiling over
    young and old,
    freedom is a
    worthy gold.

    I can feel the warmth of the sun smiling on me Micheal. The freedom of being a part of this awesome morning is fantastic :)
    ~Bravo~
    ((hugs))
    Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Dear Michael,

    sometimes the most beautiful lines come to us when we least expect it.
    I think what you made is so very beautiful and it came straight from the heart!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid