Bolt Of Lightning {Haiku}
by BREEawNUHH Oct 6, 2008
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Lightning strikes above |
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16 years ago
by ether
Clouds of despair, that part seems a little random.
Perhaps you are trying to link the lightning and clouds to each other metaphorically rather than literally but it's not showing THAT well. Still, it gives you something to think about.
Solid poem, 5/5
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16 years ago
by Lakota
Very well written!!! keep up the good work!!
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16 years ago
Pretty well done 4/5
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16 years ago
Gorgeous! I loved this poem. It was beautiful. It's really interesting to look at lightning when it flashes in the dark sky. It's one of the most beautiful scenes youll ever see. I love heat lightning .. it turns a nice purple its goregous :] Lightning is really fun to watch. This poem was great because it was a haiku and what better way to describe lightning than with this poetry style. Great work Breeee. <3 5/5. (:
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16 years ago
Like the imagery.
