Comments : Bolt Of Lightning {Haiku}

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Im not normally a fan of this type of poetry yet I like this one quite a bit, great job its short with a beautiful meaning embedded

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    First off, I love haiku poetry and anyone who learns poetry styles deserves a well done.
    I've wrote a few myself and I find them to be quite relaxing. They arn't always as easy as they look but you have created a poem that within 3 lines gave so much vivid imagery which is needed in nature poems. It's all about the picture you paint into someones mind and you did that lovely. I havn't read many of your pieces but if you write haikus this way I might just have to check them out.

    Lighthing is so gorgeous, you wrote about it inan amazing way. Definitly deserves a 5/5 in my opinion. Well done. An enjoyable read.

    -Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Like the imagery.

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Gorgeous! I loved this poem. It was beautiful. It's really interesting to look at lightning when it flashes in the dark sky. It's one of the most beautiful scenes youll ever see. I love heat lightning .. it turns a nice purple its goregous :] Lightning is really fun to watch. This poem was great because it was a haiku and what better way to describe lightning than with this poetry style. Great work Breeee. <3 5/5. (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Daniel Milano

    Pretty well done 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lakota

    Very well written!!! keep up the good work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by ether

    Clouds of despair, that part seems a little random.
    Perhaps you are trying to link the lightning and clouds to each other metaphorically rather than literally but it's not showing THAT well. Still, it gives you something to think about.
    Solid poem, 5/5

    jess ~