by 0oAshleyo0
This is Great and im proud to be the first to comment it. |
Aww very very cute poem : ) i'm glad to hear that happy endings still exist ! i loved the repetition of the "freeze" it brought the reader out of the picture you just painted and had us imagining a new one 5/5 ! |
by HollyNichole
I absolutely love this poem. it's so sweet and just... real. the way you describe everything, really lets the reader "see" whats happening |
Awwww this is a really really really cute and sweet poem. I love the whole "Stop, wait" thing it just made me want to read it. Wonderful work 5/5 |
by Mister 47
I stopped and wait and frozen y this piece soo strange one ,i never seen one like this , |
by Paiger
Beautiful, I love the idea of this poem, its very original. You paint very clear images in the readers mind. |