Before i fall

by Sorinity   Oct 6, 2008


I can't figure out why you push me away
by you I mean every person, every day.
You all see a smile and says "She's fine"
I went home to look up Suicide Hot-line.
Listening to the voice on the other end
My soul is breaking, can no longer bend.
Reaching the end of the rope i reach for thin air
There is your hand, I reach, but your not there.
Falling falling, down to my grave
overcome by fear..

Please catch me before i fall
anyone? dont let me fall....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I think this was probably the best out of the three I've read today. However, you didn't really have my attention fully throughout the whole poem again. It was kind of plain, the emotions weren't really there, I don't know. Needs improment. I think it could definatly be longer as well, that will help you express feelings and emotions much easier. 4/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Oh my. i love the emotion in it. i love how at the end you ask someone to not let you fall. it is wonderful. KM

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