First off, i'd like to say what a great poem this is. It's very inspirational.
On your second line, "came" doesnt seem to make sense.
the second line in the second stanza, the comma is off place
Besides those two ewrrors and some missing comas and periods, your poem is fine.Keep it up
Aken Sol

What an amazing story! My aunt was going to have triplets, but she was very sick, as were the babies in her womb. They died, and we never got to meet them. You are VERY lucky! Best wishes ~dandy~