by Neme juste un jouet Oct 7, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
love is
I don't see it. |
Wow such emotion! great write, although the end faded a little and it didn't quite go well with the over all feeling of the poem.. i can see your point though....keep it up!! |
by kevin
Wow this is amazingly deep seemed like u were stressed when u wrote it but its a very true poem! i like *props* |