Wow, that was really good. I'm glad you wrote another one. I like the rhyming in it... wonder who it's about? 5/5

-mandy

I liked that, didn't realize you had another one, so i'll make an extra long comment to make up for it. The rhyming was a-mazing, i really need to learn how to rhyme better. WHAT IS YOUR SECRET! and like mandy, i wonder who its about although unlike her i'm not being sarcastic. or is she even being sarcastic, i have no idea, it might be about nobody, but hmm. you should enlighten me sometime about the secrets of this poem, or not. whatever, great poem.

6/5 cause i had tto one up mandy ! :P
-polly (cause i like that name)

This is very heartfelt , and so so so sad . You tried so hard with the rhyme scheme .. But it's off in the third stanza .. And the flow needs alot of work . The message is so sad and powerful though , I'm still giving you a 5/5

Awwwwwwww...................i feel likfe that =[[[

for seriously you are amazing at writing poems. =]]]

*sighs*

I like it.
It's kind of sad though..
But the feelings you put in seem real. Even me as the reader can get in the same mood. I think people can easily relate to this poem.
So, very well done.

Take care

Love it, it sad but full of emotion 5/5

Wow. I know what this feels like, excellent job portraying such a story. I really like this piece. 5/5

Awwww.... this make me want to huge you.....your nothing so says....your awesome to me:)