If You Only Knew

by Katie   Oct 7, 2008


If you only knew,
What my scars say,
Or what I have to do
To make them fade away.

The burns sink deep
Into my beautiful life.
They make me weep.
I always show my strife.

If you only knew,
How I feel about men-
What they put me through
Over and over again.

They bash my hope
And my every dream.
I could barely cope.
They make me scream.

If you only knew,
What my life was like-
Take a view,
You'll turn out the light.

Before you question,
Just look deep.
You'll be certain
I'm no creep.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Excellent poem i must say! loved the emotion and just everything about it. way to go. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Deven

    This poem was deep but cant help but wonder did it really happen

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    I liked the rhyme, good flow!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    So true your words. If people only knew the sadness that hides behind our smiles or the bumpy roads we have traveled to make us the person we are today.

    If you only knew,
    What my life was like-
    Take a view,
    You'll turn out the light.
    ^^^
    I love this stanza and it is so very true.
    And the imagery this stanza created is excellent.

    I really enjoyed this poem, it touched me deeply.

    Well done
    Luanne

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Katie