Smile for the Camera

by 0oAshleyo0   Oct 7, 2008


She smiles
at everyone around
laughs
at all the right jokes
cries
at all the right times
but if she tries to cry out,
she chokes.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Beautiful girl,
surrounded by people,
popular and pretty,
no worry in the world.
"Everything", they say...
"she has everything"
(but love)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
And every guy she ever trusted
only let her down
tried to make her smile,
when all she did was frown.
Its never getting better.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
And maybe... just maybe
-she'll find her prince charming
-he'll save her from herself
-they love so endlessly
-live happily ever after
If only "maybes" worked.

[so i wrote a bunch of quotes and didn't want to post them up because people steal quotes a lot. and i realize they could easily do the same here... but still.] :P

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  • 16 years ago

    by brokenhearted

    They were really good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I think it worked great together!!!

    If only "maybes" worked.
    ^^such a good ending honestly i loved that! its so true to like everyone says "well be happy maybe it will happen!" why bank youre life on a maybe?! we dont have time for "maybe's" life is way to short for that
    great job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I think all these quotes work well as a poem :D
    I couldnt tell the diff until you wrote that they were quotes at the end!!!
    Love theseee. :D xxx And yes I totally agree that people steal quotes! an author on this site once stole a quote WORD FOR WORD and when I asked about it she said she came up with it by herself? and that it was a "coincidence" haha :P

    5/5 luv.

  • 16 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    Nice work.I loved the way you put"everything but love"cos it happens a lot.5/5
    btw:thanks for the comment

  • 16 years ago

    by Ignoris

    Nice job! Those words are very true.
    Thanks for the comment on 'Violated'.

    Chin up, Eleni