Yea. i agree with mysterious charmers this is one of your best writings yet. this is a sad story. and yet beautiful in every way. keep writing. 5/5

I really like this poem alot! 5/5

Wow! An amazing poem. Beautifully written

Good work keep it up

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This is a very heart-felt poem.. you can just feel what she feels with every line read.. very well done.. if i could i would give it a ten.. its deserves that much..

Damn good poem. Keep up the goodwork. ;)

This is such a sad but amazing poem!! i am very sorry this had to happen to you. no one should have to deal with any of that. very emotional. def a 5!!