It's a great poem I love it i know exaccly how u feel

Wow this is terrible i'm so sorry to hear that you and your dad have problems and issues, your poem although terribly sad was well written and a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing , Well done

Grant

I loved how you wrote this poem it was a very well written poem because you made the reader understand the broken relationship. I have a poem about my realtionship with my father...its pretty wordy...its always hard to talk about your relationship with your father...specially because they were such a big influence.....and then not anymore..
well i loved it..
sorry about ur rl.

Aww, Nour...this is so touching and so sad.
I have had a break up with my dad too for five years. I was sad all the time, but I wanted to teach him a lesson...and he did learn it. I hope, I truly hope that the two of you will be able to sort out your differences, because your family is what is closest to your heart. Insha'Allah you two will be friends again.

Hugs to you, my dear girl:)

5/5 Ingrid