by MERCY is never shown Oct 7, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I'm standing in the shadows |
by Jennafluff
I love this poem, i feel the emotion and passion gone into it. You wrote it woth heartache and tears rolling down your face. I cann see how you are confused with him leaving you and how you wish it could be the same as before... Keep it up |
Very strong poem, however you might want to make it stronger and go through and do a bit of punctuation etc. |