Hell on Earth

by Lauren   Oct 7, 2008


Death is in the air,
It looms as if a fog,
Everyone can tell,
Something is very wrong.

The earth has opened up,
And the fiery tongue of hell extends,
It's flames lick at the feet of the world,
Everything is coming to an end.

The sun flickers out like a candle in the breeze,
Darkness settles in, and the only light is hell,
A heavy mist hovers all around,
There's no way to vanquish this death spell.

Flames grow higher in a whirl of smoke and fire,
A creature in the shadows whispers coldly,
"Welcome to the nightmare, This is Hell on Earth."
Then with a fiery explosion, he disappears boldly.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    This one was good. The flow was good, the rhymes were kind of off. A little forced maybe. But the emotion was good. Not excellent. The whole idea of the poem was pretty unique. Good job.

    Soda E>

  • 16 years ago

    by tigerdan

    Excellent! That show AWSOME Imagination and creativity! ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by kelleyana

    A very great poem, I love the title "Hell on earth' but i can assure you that that the paradise may also be on earth.
    keep on writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxXCrazyXNeonXGurlXxx

    Wow very good alot of emotion to this pice i loved it