Comments : A Deadly Disease.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This disease takes peoples lives and that is a fact. Cancer is everywhere and if it isn't in your life it will certainly feature in your nightmares.

    Well done on writing about Cancer, many others would shy away from such a subject. You have left out mrtaphorical language and rhyme and left this poem open for all to understand beyond all doubt.

    Take care

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was a lovely piece and i'm thankful you wrote it. My family suffers with breast cancer on my fathers side, so there could be a chance that I get it. Hopefully I don't but I'm still glad you wrote this as my nan had breast cancer. Thankfully she is still alive but she lost her sisters to it.

    This poem was quite like a speech but it was beautiful as it showed the audience that cancer is out there and it can happen to anyone and that it does happen to very many people around the world. I liked how you seemed to of used factual information it really portrayed truth and reality and hit my heart like an arrow. So much emotion was within this poem.

    I really did enjoy this piece and again thankyou for writing it. It means alot to many people in ways which you couldn't even imagine. This shows you have a lovely heart and would help the world if you could.

    Well done. -Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Very touching write you have penned here.

    Though yes is is more of a speech the message it carries is woven with words of love and compassion. It is a beautiful dedication and whether it be in poetic form, speech form, letter form and form .... it is truly heart touching to read.

    We see pink ribbons daily that hold a true meaning.
    Those who have struggled for years with this disease,
    ^^^
    Hopefully someday these pink ribbons will bear a symbol that carries the words "cure"

    Thank you for sharing this touching read
    Luanne