"I'm fine"

yeah. ok, jesse.
so am i.

Deep within the confines
Of a cold and lonely mind
Where the spinning tops
And balls of yarn
Unravel and unwind
Somewhere where in the middle
Of somewhere else
And in between
The difference between nightmares
And living in a dream

Red bloodshot and teary
But these brown piercing eyes
No, I wasn't crying
It's the air
It's just so dry

*redo*

"I'm fine"

yeah..sure. ok

Deep within the confines
Of a cold and lonely mind
Where the spinning tops
And balls of yarn
Unravel and unwind

^^ I love the imagery..relatable...the wording's also wonderful. yarn and tops are so whimsicle and autumnal and happy and then they all get screwed over. lovely.

Somewhere where in the middle
Of somewhere else
And in between
The difference between nightmares
And living in a dream

^^ha. ha. ha. that's all i got for that one..wait. no. when i was waiting for you to call on friday, i was walking up the hill near the crap-coloured animals in the crap-coloured dirt and i got to this little fork in the path and i thought i was having a nightmare again. that's what that reminded me of.

Red bloodshot and teary
But these brown piercing eyes
No, I wasn't crying
It's the air
It's just so dry

^^ air and allergies...always. i'm sorry for whatever's bothering you.

5/5