Comments : Starry eyed smiles

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Please don't change for me,
    that's not what I want.
    I know if you do, later it
    will be back to haunt you.

    ^^^How true these words are, dear Tabi.
    When you truly love a person, you have to allow him to be whom he wants to be.

    A very endearing write and I truly enjoyed!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    This is really sweet and really cute. and very well written. it flows nicely though a few bumps as i was reading it, but still very good. 5/5 good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal

    So sweet. I love the message in it. It really sums up how you feel about someone you honestly love. I may not like this about you but I don't want you to change it because it's a part of you. Love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous

    This is one of my favorite *adds to favs* i love it!
    10/10!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    To make sure that you really do know.
    take out do since it's repeated in the next line .

    I do love this poem . The only thing i have to say is about your writing style in general . You should either pick the four line stanzas like in half your poem , or write out full sentences when it seems like one line isn't enough . It would just help out the flow .