Perfume

by LiveMyLifeOnALullaby   Oct 8, 2008


He twisted and turned,
Screamed and coughed,
Groaned and thrashed.

Soaked in sweat
Thinking he'd rather die
At last, he fell distant
And grew calmer.

All his suffering,
Gone.

*[Every word from this poem came from a completely random page in the novel PERFUME. This was a poem assignment from my English class and I decided to make two poems strictly from words of a novel I have read. We had to give our self a rule that we had to follow while writing a poem.]*

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  • 14 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oi this is a good poem...really all the lines from the novel?it's good really. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This is a very interesting style that you have going on here. I do like it as it is very unique and feel that it's somthing that not many could do.

    I will say that you shouldn't restrict your vocab. it will perhaps hinder the poem and what you would like to do.

    I think it was very well done 5/5 for orignality.

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