Hi, I thought I would return the favor and leave you a comment.
I really like this line,

If this was a dream
please don't wake me up
let me sleep a little longer
for only in my dream our love is stronger

I can feel the anguish of your waking moments, for you to live in your dreams where you're love for this girl is returned.

Simply amazing!

Alicia

Very interesting, sad yet touching. I like your writing styles. It merits 5/5, kel.

What a sad write. This was written so well with emotions that broke my heart. What a difference this is to the poems you are writing now. I hope you are happier and these feelings long gone.

Very sad, but touching, you can feel the emotion, wonderful work