Golden child

by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash   Oct 8, 2008


Golden child (collab)

He stands out in a crowd
A golden child is he
His spirit brightens up
our darkest days and eve's

To his own reflection
he is blind, our miracle child
Like his beloved horses
He is noble, free and wild

A fine young man and loving son
He wants love and peace for everyone
Things go wrong within his life
He smiles and says God will provide

He comes to me for some advice
But TJ's life is a sacrifice
Always giving, always sharing
I love you TJ, for always caring

Grant

The first two stanzas were written by Ingrid/Healing spirit
The last two by me
It was a pleasure to write for TJ with you Ingrid
Thank you for asking me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Megan Olney

    I really loved this poem. It's great how people came together to create this masterpiece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "Like his beloved horses
    He is noble, free and wild"
    `I loved these lines! I loved how you refered to him like his horses, he is noble.. free.. and wild. I think you hit the description of TJ very well!
    :]

    "He wants love and peace for everyone
    Things go wrong within his life
    He smiles and says God will provide"
    `You really DO know TJ just like the rest of us. This is 100% true.

    "I love you TJ, for always caring"
    `Wow, the last stanza and this line really touches the readers heart. You are a wonderful person Grant for always helping TJ through his hard times and giving him guidance when he needs it.

    Beautiful poem overall written by the two of you. This was the most beautiful dedication I've read in a very long time. TJ deserves this more than anything. He is a great guy and deserves to have some recognition. I can't say how much I loved this poem. You two put together a great touching poem for TJ.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Thank you too Ingrid TJ has become very special to me and he needs a lot of love and support from us his friends and family, I look to TJ as a son
    TJ it's just a simple poem my boy but it's from our hearts

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Awww Grant! It turned out so beautifully!
    I hope our beloved friend will appreciate our gift:)
    Thank you so much for wanting to make this collab with me, I am so very thrilled about the result!

    Hugs to you my friend and thank you so much for always being there for TJ. He truly is a golden child and I want him to be loved by as many people as possible:)

    Ingrid 5/5

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