by Melpomene
Sweetie, I'm glad you used this title. I felt as though it fitted you at the moment perfectly, though it is a shame. I've been reading your latest pieces but no time to really comment and I must say that when you are really sad you write so beautifully. This was another one of those magical beauty and the beast pieces which kinda broke my heart for you. I can't keep saying sorry, I wish I could help... |
by Hollymariee
Good flow , rhymes and I love your wording . It's so powerful , as is the picture in my mind of emotions when i'm reading this . Once again , excellent job . 5/5 |
by Brittany C
Last line 1st stanza |
by xxxStarSxxx
In the third line of the second stanza, |
by Austin
Very nice. I must say, you greatly use your diction to your advantage. Not a huge vocabulary, but an awesome way of expressing your thoughts. Great repetition. |
by Katie
Wow. That was amazing. I really like your style of putting stuff in the little wiggly parenthesis thingd(what are they called?). That seems to give me a differnet view of the poem. I really loved this one. I'm putting it in my favorites! |
Though this is a very sad poem it also reads like a love poem that reaches every depth of the heart, soul and mind and love of every kind |
by ALEX
This one was really good! Only a few parts were a little iffy: |
by Gizmo
That was an absoultely wonderful title i must say, its eye-catching, and it speaks out to the reader so they want to read your poem. |