Secrets

by XxRed RougexXKoRn   Oct 8, 2008


I'm so sorry
but i've kept a secret from you
and theres so much worries
that you and me
will never be the same
i wanna give you my love
but to me its not a game
so i have to be careful to who i give my love
and my love for you is so real
but she stands in the way
of me telling you how i feel
so yet again i put it on delay
knowing that someday
it'll be my turn for us to be together
and she'll pay
for every tear i've had from her
and i well always remember
all those nights we spent together
so i'll tell you i love you in October
cause i believe that we could last forever

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    "well never be the same"
    ^^ i think you meant will!!! : x i make those mistakes to when im so caught up in writing the poem!!!

    I thought this was a nicer free flowish type of poem : ) i think a lot of girls will be able to relate to this situation b/c it is very common now a days unfortunately : / That is a powerful thing to be able to connect with your readers though it is great because it keeps the reader interested and intrigued in what you are writing they feel for you because they have been or are there
    great job! just the other suggestions i gave on the last poem i would give here to

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiiffaanyy

    Awwh, i like thos one!! it reminds me of "him" =(
    but awesome job on the poem 5/5 =]

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