Aww hun this was really sad and deep. u did a good job expressing yourself, good use of words. stay strong, always here if u need anything.

;/ when i read this i thinkk of my dad
-its really good:)

To the message that you left at the top of the poem this is no disappointment whatsoever. It doesn't necessarily matter if the poem didn't rhyme or even make SENSE to the reader because all that matters really is that you understood what you were writing and that it means a lot to you (: This is an amazing poem and you really let your emotions out and we can see this through every word you used. It's very descriptive and has a lot of depth which I love to see in poems.
Keep it up
xxxxx