I Love You

by AngelicDecadence   Oct 9, 2008


I love you baby,
With all of my heart.
I thought nothing could happen,
To tear us apart.
We would always be together,
Through the good and the bad.
Because you would never do anything,
To make me mad, or sad.
You were the perfect person,
For me and only me.
The one that held the key to my heart,
And the key to my soul,
So that there would always be,
A place for that empty black hole,
Well, honey that hole is back,
And I don't know what to say,
Because it seems to me,
that hole is there to stay.
You would see into my heart,
And show me my soul,
Now that your gone,
I don't know how to move on,
How can I mourn,
When such a deed was done?
It's like a thorn,
Tearing up all that was fun.
How can I go on,
When you taught me how to move?
I am no pawn,
I may be strong, but I do bruise!
All I wish to know,
Is how do I grieve,
How did we ever get so low?
Please tell me, will this pain ever leave...?

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  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Good piece but your new pieces are much better....ughh I don't know what to say except that I enjoyed the sad tone within your words but.....I believe you can do much better. Good luck.

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Very beautifully written 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Nicely written, well I think it must been hard for you to move especially when you're still in love with the one you love. Well I truly enjoyed reading this, keep it up:)

  • 15 years ago

    by Rocky

    I really liked that poem but it lost its rythm every now and again like where you said "To make me mad, or sad." you should use either one or the other or change mad to angry to keep the flow as 2 words of one syllable that rhyme so perfectly kinda throw it off. also i feel the sentences
    "The one that held the key to my heart,
    And the key to my soul"
    would flow better as
    "the one that held
    the key to my heart
    and to my soul"
    . otherwise i liked the free rhyme scheme you used, it made it sound alot more natural than a fixed one would have. but you should maybe also think of using half rhymes more

  • 15 years ago

    by Second to None

    Gawd. you just explaid exactly how i feel. i love the last line. it really raps up the poem.

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