Frozen and Condemned In Hell

Wow this is amazing I really really like it, love that hay diddle diddle part that was to cute. greeat imagery, i could see the whole thing... some in slow motion strange... but still everyhting played out perfectly in my head... you find yourself wanting to yell for the girl to realize that creatured are after her... woderfully realistic... 5/5

Knowing my self harlea , let me tell you somthing no one is condemed to hell , and de3mons dont scare of me , and if you want i can tell you the story why !!

if you , if you harlea want out , you can out , always, demons great illusion is to create this no way out world for us , so we drown more and more in depression !!

i know somthing from your poem , that your need to get out ,

how you need to get out is up to you ,...

if you really want to out i am next , Pm me anytime i will tell you how !!

this poem is very well writen adn scary at the same time not scare becasue the words , but becasue of the intentions and feelings behind those words ,

you deserve a great vote for thte poem ,

but same time , i woudl want to say , dont keep it up

bless you

Your amazing sis! just ya worry me a little ya know? lol 5/5