by Courageous Dreamer Oct 9, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
The dense fog in my mind is slowly distinguishing. |
by Sorinity
Very powerful. I really like how you use imagry to further illustrate your point. It has a wonderful flow and you really managed to connect with the reader. great read. |
Wow that great. is ok. keep it up |
by Heer
Awosme!!:D |
Hey Temps very well written, i like the sense of discovery of new and better things, the possitive attitude that exudes from the poem. The dark and dismal always with the light shining somewhere up ahead. |
by nikki
This is really good. i like how it just all flows together. i really like this poem. good job! 5/5 |