Jeannie
This piece is full of so much pain and tears.
Where faith has wretched its lonely voice
Time ticks away each day with proof
Upon the brink of love we cry
Forgetting we are humble fools
Inside each star that shines above
We hold fast to the hope it seems
But love has left us all alone
Within the heart of faithless dreams.
When love dies so do our dreams we had. yet maybe there is a smalll sliver of hope still waiting for us to find it. Yet the sadness and lonliness blind us to what we still have waiting.
Excellent job!'
Love Cindy