Comments : Lone Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    This piece is full of so much pain and tears.

    Where faith has wretched its lonely voice
    Time ticks away each day with proof
    Upon the brink of love we cry
    Forgetting we are humble fools
    Inside each star that shines above
    We hold fast to the hope it seems
    But love has left us all alone
    Within the heart of faithless dreams.

    When love dies so do our dreams we had. yet maybe there is a smalll sliver of hope still waiting for us to find it. Yet the sadness and lonliness blind us to what we still have waiting.
    Excellent job!'
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Ohhhhh Jeannie you have sparked tears with this write my friend.

    You have touched the deepest of my heart with your words.

    Touching .... touching write Auntie and a place I have seen before.

    ~Hugs~
    Luanne