Masked by the Fear Within -Acrostic-

by Nicole the Fairy   Oct 9, 2008


~ Masked by the Fear Within ~
By Nicole Pirri

Masked by the fear within,
Always trying to manage this grin.
Rummaging through the memories I've kept;
Could never understand why I can't accept.

Confidence reigns over me,
Realizing it could never be.
Although, I wish I could pull of this sin,
Masked by the fear within.

* Dedicated to a dear friend, Marc Ortiz.. He has given me such confidence.. and breaks my mask which has kept this fear within. Thanking you! :) *

Written By: Nicole Pirri
Thursday, 9th October, 2008
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**Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
words as in the title.**

^ Thanks Marc Ortiz for this! :) :)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh wow O_O What a coincidence. Yesterday I was trying to write an Acrostic poem... Well I failed.

    Anyway I'm happy to hear that I helped you with your confidence. It's my passion to help people with their problems.. (Wanna be Psychologist)

    Anyway as always the flow is smooth. It's very hard to write an Acrostic poetry that flows and rhyme... And in this poem you used 2 stanzas. Marc and Cram (reverse of Marc) - excellent...

    Suggestion.. Change the title to:
    Masked by the Fear Within {Acrostic}

    And put the poetry type at the end.

    *Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
    words as in the title.*

    P.S.
    You really have a potential to improve. Never stop writing.

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