It's a thin line

I love it. it is short and sweet, the point is expressed beautifully. You're very talented, keep up the good work. You are definitely one of my favorite authors.

I like the structure and the rhyming is great.

This has a melody to it as u read, as if you were writting a song. i like it

This is great. shortly descriptive, lovely writing using simple words and rhymes to describe so much emotion. i normally have to write an essay to get the same point across.

Nice. Love the ryming. a little short but its still good = ] 5/5