Saw your request in the poetry club-thought id check it out.

woah-thats really good.
Dark, deep and sad-but very good.
Like the raw emotion used-a 5/5 from me.

Aish
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Fantastic job...

well-expressed despite of being so dark and sad of the poem..i think i am feeling the same way...

10/5

I saw this poem in the request area

amazing job
very sad but good."My ghost will forever walk the earth twisted and alone" loved that line.

wonderful job
5/5