Dream Lover

by Robert Anthony   Oct 9, 2008


I see you every night
night after night
you tell me, "I Love You"
without a fight

I cant believe it's true
someone like you,
would want to be with me
It's like were stuck like glue

When i wake up, your gone
the one i love
The only place i find you
seems to be, In my Dreams...

* I wrote this just now, i know it might need some more work, but just comment for now, Thanks!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael Verterel

    On the line, it's like we're stuck like glue, it would sound better, it's like we're magnets sticking like glue, or as is, what'ev...

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    Love it darling! i feel like that sometimes too! hahaha love u and love the poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn

    Its coming along great, dreams can be overly powerful things! in the last paragraph you sort of abandoned your rhyme scheme, but other than that its very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Aww thats sweet. dreaming seems to bring the best and worst out of our lives but we meet the most interesting and wonderful people there i really like it

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