Aww thats sweet. dreaming seems to bring the best and worst out of our lives but we meet the most interesting and wonderful people there i really like it

Its coming along great, dreams can be overly powerful things! in the last paragraph you sort of abandoned your rhyme scheme, but other than that its very good.

Love it darling! i feel like that sometimes too! hahaha love u and love the poem!

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