Awww... so beautiful, should be put in a movie haha :]

loved the word choice!

5/5

Haha, i wish!!
i was bored in class and my teacher kept telling us to listen to her because everyone was talking and doing their own thing!!
so i got inspired

WOW! Increadible! Good job! ;)

Really nice poems with lots of expression and thought!
however i feel it could have been better if the stanzas were of the same length, but thats my opinion.
I still Love it though =]