I Miss Your Love.

by Courageous Dreamer   Oct 9, 2008


Sadness rushes over me instantly surprising me,
making me realize how much I miss your love.
Remembering the past is not such a great idea,
for it only causes me more pain looking at the
memories that were so beautiful, yet lead to
the shattering of both of our hearts in the end.

I still yearn to hear your sweet voice everyday,
the tears still fall from my eyes full of pain.
Dreaming about how perfect things once were,
then comparing to how they are today,
makes me want you back that much more.
But you are completely devoted to her now,
leaving me with no chance for redemption.

Every second of the day I struggle to move on.
I sometimes wonder if this really is the best,
am I truly going to be okay without you here,
or will I just break into pieces all over again?
Questions still linger in my mind desperately
searching for the answers that show truth.

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Wow temps.. this was...wow.. full of emotions, great wording, very full of power and over all a great poem. great job. 5/5
    ** harlea

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Topaz

    Didnt you use to write poems that ryhme? I dont excactly remember, but there are two types of poems in my opinions, Metaphors of real life events, and documents of real life events, This was a documentation of one and normaly they are dull boring, snore worthy but yours acutaly had emotion behind it and it connected to me not excactly sure how but it did and im still replaying some of the words in my head, a good poem cant wait to read the next one. oh but ive seen better out of you. O.o

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Again I eny your free verse talent I felt your feelings flowed so free that you know what it is like to be in love

    Over all an intense love poem
    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    Awwwwwwwwww, tempsy, sad but sweet poem...

    I'm sure you'll be okay temps :)

    I know exactly how you feel...I've been in this situation, i know it hurts, but eventually you'll be fine :)

    wish you the best in life, keep writting...

    mwaaah!!

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