Awwwwwwwwww, tempsy, sad but sweet poem...

I'm sure you'll be okay temps :)

I know exactly how you feel...I've been in this situation, i know it hurts, but eventually you'll be fine :)

wish you the best in life, keep writting...

mwaaah!!

Again I eny your free verse talent I felt your feelings flowed so free that you know what it is like to be in love

Over all an intense love poem
5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Didnt you use to write poems that ryhme? I dont excactly remember, but there are two types of poems in my opinions, Metaphors of real life events, and documents of real life events, This was a documentation of one and normaly they are dull boring, snore worthy but yours acutaly had emotion behind it and it connected to me not excactly sure how but it did and im still replaying some of the words in my head, a good poem cant wait to read the next one. oh but ive seen better out of you. O.o

Wow temps.. this was...wow.. full of emotions, great wording, very full of power and over all a great poem. great job. 5/5
** harlea