Waht can i say !!!

mmmm

i can tell somthing to you , someone living in a bad place dont see where he is untill he get a better thing he will look back and see it

sjut dont give up

Wow jenny jen.. wat power.. wat emotion.. wata kick ass poem. great job and keep ur chin up. 5/5
<3 harlea

Wow. this was amazing!!!
5/5

Great poem, 5/5

I'd kinda like an explanation to this piece - I enjoy it but I got a few vibes from it - (1) moving on from a place or whatever that's not as good as you imagine it to be as a previous poster insinuated OR (2) I thought about Heaven and the Bible within Heaven - and last of all (3) about people always telling you to move on like after a bad relationship - because people think you should just quit when things go wrong instead of put the effort into making them work... and the end (yet I get closer to you) kinda made me think that you were becoming like everyone else... if (you) were the people you were talking about pushing and shoving ---- SEE HOW I FEEL!!!!! Please explain this :D I like it in general but curious and possibly slow ;)

Thanks in advance!