Angel With Blue Eyes

by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life   Oct 10, 2008


My body shakes violently,
My breathing is getting fast,
Another sharp jab through my heart.
Defeated by this pain the pieces fall.

I search wildly for my dear friend.
My tears flow like the river's streams.
My hands still shaking,
I want to die,
And be free.
I want to be able to close my eyes
And not see the ghastly portrait of my life.

I move weakly through my room,
Bumping and crashing with everything in my path.
I'm about to fall,
But my angel catches me before I hit the ground.
In his arms I pour myself out.
I tell him my thoughts.
My angel has saved me one more time.

He told me to look into his eyes.
My pain slowly fades away.
His eyes are blue like the deep ocean,
A beautiful healing sight
He holds me in his arms
Softly touching my hair

The miracle of his presence
Spreads through my heart, soul and mind
Slowly replacing the horror
With his smile and blue eyes
My soul feels lighter
Floating like a feather in the sky.
The pieces of my heart are slowly sown together with his love.

Tonight, my angel has saved me from the scars in my past
My tears for now have dried.
Every time I break my angel will come
And take me in his arms.
He will take my pain away with those blue eyes.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Bianca The Queen Of Hearts

    Nice one!! great job!! AMAZING!! i think you get the message...i loved it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was rather different and I really enjoyed the style as it suits the mood.
    Your poem is really deep and stirs a lot of emotion, but I think the title could be a little better. The title seems to weaken the poem because it is really typical where as the poem is so unique.
    Other then that I love this poem, it is put together really well.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I loved it, it is easy to relate to. I know that I do, it reminds me of my bf. The words you used were great and allowed me to feel what you were feeling. :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Now this is the type of poem I expect to see when I read your poems.

    Truly a great poem and It really makes you sit back and think about something before you do it. I assume that the angel has taken you back with him.

    I really liked this poem and could relate to it.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Wow, this is beautiful... I'll be honest at first I didn't really like the flow, the first stanza seemed a bit off, but as I read torward the middle stanzas you really brought everything together, and the last stanza was amazing, great job... 5/5

Read All Comments (11)

More Poems By a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life