by melissa
I love it soooooooo much this is how i feel bout my bf or angel very good 5/5 |
by ether
I like this. As a hole it's quite different but still has the best messages. |
by troy
Good, dark but really good. Another great piece of writing. |
by sezz
Omg, im lost for words, simply...no. no words explain this one. keep it up |
by nikki
Oh wow. that was amazingly written, the flow was great your vocab was amazigly brought together and it sounded so good. it was brilliant and i would not change a thing about it. great job 5/5 |
This is the most heavenly love poem I have read the free verse flowed flawlessy with romantic passion |
by HidinVictim
Wow, this is beautiful... I'll be honest at first I didn't really like the flow, the first stanza seemed a bit off, but as I read torward the middle stanzas you really brought everything together, and the last stanza was amazing, great job... 5/5 |
by Dark Savior
Now this is the type of poem I expect to see when I read your poems. |
by Brittany C
I loved it, it is easy to relate to. I know that I do, it reminds me of my bf. The words you used were great and allowed me to feel what you were feeling. :) 5/5 |
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was rather different and I really enjoyed the style as it suits the mood. |
Nice one!! great job!! AMAZING!! i think you get the message...i loved it!! |