Comments : Angel With Blue Eyes

  • 16 years ago

    by melissa

    I love it soooooooo much this is how i feel bout my bf or angel very good 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ether

    I like this. As a hole it's quite different but still has the best messages.
    Everything fits in well with each other here, there doesn't really seem to be anything out of place. The flow is pretty good and I like your vocab.
    5/5

    jess ~

  • 16 years ago

    by troy

    Good, dark but really good. Another great piece of writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by sezz

    Omg, im lost for words, simply...no. no words explain this one. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Oh wow. that was amazingly written, the flow was great your vocab was amazigly brought together and it sounded so good. it was brilliant and i would not change a thing about it. great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is the most heavenly love poem I have read the free verse flowed flawlessy with romantic passion

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Wow, this is beautiful... I'll be honest at first I didn't really like the flow, the first stanza seemed a bit off, but as I read torward the middle stanzas you really brought everything together, and the last stanza was amazing, great job... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Now this is the type of poem I expect to see when I read your poems.

    Truly a great poem and It really makes you sit back and think about something before you do it. I assume that the angel has taken you back with him.

    I really liked this poem and could relate to it.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I loved it, it is easy to relate to. I know that I do, it reminds me of my bf. The words you used were great and allowed me to feel what you were feeling. :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was rather different and I really enjoyed the style as it suits the mood.
    Your poem is really deep and stirs a lot of emotion, but I think the title could be a little better. The title seems to weaken the poem because it is really typical where as the poem is so unique.
    Other then that I love this poem, it is put together really well.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Bianca The Queen Of Hearts

    Nice one!! great job!! AMAZING!! i think you get the message...i loved it!!