Really good poem.
I can relate. 4/5

I like the Devil thing but this is .. not very original. There's no amazing vocab to set it appart from anything else, nothing really amazing with the imagery.
But there is the God comparision to the Devil which makes it alright.
4/5

jess ~

Awww sweetie, short but it didnt need to be long, amazing how you got your point across so easy, pure talent

It was a very short poem but you did get the message across. your point came across so easily and quickly and it was great. this title gets used alot but the way you made it short it was kinda unique compared to others, good job. 5/5

It is very deep but I believe in writting what you feel at the time

I also believe most have felt the hopeless depression reflected in this dark poem

You know this poem is very short. does that make it any less of a poem? no it doesn't. There is a poem that is three words, that is probably one of the most talked about poems in recent memory.

I loved this poem and felt that it was good.

I'm ready to die,
My angel, please take me to God's side.

I think that line was mis-placed but other than that, I don't really have anymore advice for you.

5/5

Mmmm not bad, a bit indecisive at first your like put me by God's side, then your like by the Devil's side is were you belong... but i understand being indecisive. were girls its what we do haha. still I love the simplicity of this piece it's so short but it has a lot of emotion... i don't remember the rhythm pattern for a haiku but you might look into that... this would make a wonderful haiku, but thats just my opinion... 5/5

Good poem, very short but good. It would have been nice if you put a little more into it so that people would be able to better understand where you are coming from and why you felt the way that you did. 5/5

This was really interesting. I like how there is so much emotion in so little words. This is a great piece of work. I don't know what else to say about this, it is so simple yet so well done.
5/5