Evil Puppet

Excellent poem very creepy 5/5

That was a scary poem and I loved it. That was one of the best poems i have ever read. The flow was really great and the imagery was good as well. This was a really good poem. Good Job.

Lies Leave Your Lips and Evil Puppet

Again, I decided to read the entire poem before I started commenting.

The story overall was a little confusing. I think I understand the meaning of the poem, but it just didnt seem to flow very well as a story. I thought it skipped too much between stanza's 4 and 5. In stanza 4, they are preparing for the show, then suddenly, in stanza 5, it was over. I think you should drop a stanza or two about the show itself. It would help the story line.

In stanza 7, the first line mentions a gun and a knife, but no further mention was made of the knife. Unless he used it to carve a puppet mouth on everyone (which i really didnt understand), i think it was overlooked.

I like the actual meaning of the poem and the imagery is good for the most part, but I was lost in a few places and kind of lost the scene. I think a little more material would help out.

I would rate it a 3/5, but I didnt leave a rating. I didnt want to drag down your votes.

A decent poem in the big picture.

Ohhh no im scared of puppets and dolls lol anyway i still loved it

I love this poem. When I read this poem I was envisioning a little boy or girl who was being bullied by the bigger kids. You hear about this stories where one day the quiet child takes over and kills all those who laughed at his misfortune. I don't think this is what you were trying to get at but regardless it was very well done.
5/5