Playing In The Snow

by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life   Oct 10, 2008


Let's go out and play on the snow.
Let's go see it fall.

Come on daddy take my hand.
Help me make a snow man.

Mommy, please make your hot chocolate.
And call me and daddy when you're done.

Come on mommy take my hand.
Let's go finish the snow man.

Little brother do you want some bread?
Eat it with the hot chocolate mommy made.

Come on little brother take my hand.
Let's go play in the snow today.

Thank you daddy, mommy, and brother,
For letting me feel like a kid again.

**Wrote this poem in memory of my first Christmas with my new family. It was the happiest day of my life. Will always be in my heart**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    Awe so sweet! i really liked very cute 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bianca The Queen Of Hearts

    That made tears come up in my eyes...brought back long buried memories of someone... good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Family the most important thing you can think of , very well writen !

    i understand why you writen this poem ,

    it touched me too and it showed the affection you have , great poem i enjoyed readin it
    keep it up too !

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Wow, I love this it. It is completely adorable. I think you tied every thing together really well :) This poem is really good and I wouldn't change a thing...

    But the second line should be "let's" instead of le's
    Well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked this poem, I love nature poems. Umm, line two "le's" should be "Let's". Other then that I see nothing wrong with it. This is a poem that probably almost everyone could relate to in some way. 5/5

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