Just like a taste of Ecstasy

by kelleyana   Oct 10, 2008


Yummy, what a taste so divine?
This must be a sign,
a lick from the finger it's a pure bliss
Needed to be kiss.

It indulge my pleasure, gives me joy, thick fullness, oh goodness.
Creamy smooth, oh wonder.
What a taste make me go crazy over...

Mouthwatering chocolate fountain,
Juicy as it seems
It's like an experience of a wet dream, a sweet, smooth
Running tempting river waiting to be devoured.

Irresistible I just fell into it
Heavenly, joy and ecstasy,
What a rich goodness oh! Madness,
Emmmm, yummy, gourmet.

The combined with nuts that is perfectly mixed
Enough to feed my egos.
My fingers in tempted to touch,
The taste gets me high.
This is the best feeling, I can never deny.

It's my delirium time,
its all over my body needed to be wipe
The voluptuous sensation that I need to be touch
I had a crush; it can never be too much.

My Aphrodite, my heart rate rises,
My mental is put to activity,
Emmmm, interesting, exotic, really luscious,
I've climb to the seven heavens then finally came back to earth.

kelleyana junique.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Scintillating and Sensual, Enjoyed!!! Fabulous Write!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Thanks so much for your comment.
    After a brief search i came accross Robert Garndiner's poems, which i discovered for the first, well he's a great poet but i don't see ANY comparison between us.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Ha ha....you made such an enthusiastic poem! You should take a look at Robert Garndiner's poems, that man is the same:)
    I loved the whole concept of the poem. It's a pity you didn't post it in the thread, I think you might have won!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hullo there ok its an interesting poem and captivating because of the way you describe the differing feelings and sensations, I gather english is not your first language, though i knew what you meant throughout the poem the rhyme was slightly off as was the meter, all in all the poem was well written and most certainly enthusiastic. Well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    It's like an experience of a wet dream,

    Lol. Okay, that made me smile. :D

    My Aphrodite, my heart rate rises,

    That's a good reference, Aphrodite. :]

    Okay, so the english is pretty good, parts of it aren't correct, though I know what you mean.

    I liked the idea of describing the sensation with taste, such as the title does, but I think you could have gone into more depth than just a cluster of descriptive words that basically all mean, mmm good.

    The rhyming was a little off, but was all right at first.

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