Each line leaves the reader wondering what is coming next. Will it take us where we think its going or somewhere else. You can also give your own personal meanings to each line.

Great job!!!!

5/5

Well done!....That was so diffrent such a fantasy, and very imaganitve..5/5

Yummy poem! It took me into a sweet dream while readin'! Into a different world that's full of colours and things that aren't earthly! I really loved it, keep it up 5/5

I can absolutely taste ur ecstacy...i think this is so far ur best work... the rythm n the flow is just perfect...keep it up;)

It's like an experience of a wet dream,

Lol. Okay, that made me smile. :D

My Aphrodite, my heart rate rises,

That's a good reference, Aphrodite. :]

Okay, so the english is pretty good, parts of it aren't correct, though I know what you mean.

I liked the idea of describing the sensation with taste, such as the title does, but I think you could have gone into more depth than just a cluster of descriptive words that basically all mean, mmm good.

The rhyming was a little off, but was all right at first.

Hullo there ok its an interesting poem and captivating because of the way you describe the differing feelings and sensations, I gather english is not your first language, though i knew what you meant throughout the poem the rhyme was slightly off as was the meter, all in all the poem was well written and most certainly enthusiastic. Well done

Grant

Ha ha....you made such an enthusiastic poem! You should take a look at Robert Garndiner's poems, that man is the same:)
I loved the whole concept of the poem. It's a pity you didn't post it in the thread, I think you might have won!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Thanks so much for your comment.
After a brief search i came accross Robert Garndiner's poems, which i discovered for the first, well he's a great poet but i don't see ANY comparison between us.

Scintillating and Sensual, Enjoyed!!! Fabulous Write!!!