Poem #4(need help with title plz)

by xxxBrokenHeartxxx   Oct 10, 2008


When you were sad
I made you happy
When you were down
I picked you up
But when I was sad
You only made me cry
When I was down
You looked at my helpless Soul
I wanted to believe
That you really loved me
But I realized that you lied
Now I've found someone else
And she loves me for who I am
When I am sad
She makes me happy
When I am down
She picks me up
What do you have left now
Now that you've lost me?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sharr

    Its a confusing poem i must say, i think you need to sort out what the poem is actually about so people understand more, and put more descriptive words in it:) but no trouble with any other poem! and i ent to sure what the title could be

  • 16 years ago

    by ether

    I think that this needs a bit more descriptive language to make it less literal, there's too many I's and she's in there.
    I don't have a title for you, sorry.

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