Comments : A girl called Charley

  • 16 years ago

    by jasmine cherry

    This poem is not about me and i hope u like it :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow it's really well written. Very sad and touching.

    I loved the last stanza.

    "There is no one there
    but him
    She tries to let the darkness in gulf her
    as her sweet dreams
    evades her
    only the nightmare of what's soon
    to come
    each and every day follows her
    until that man who's suppose to protect her
    the one she calls father
    crumbles
    under the sins he has created"

    10/10